IFComp 2021: Scoring and review rubrics

This year I’m participating in the 2021 Interactive Fiction Competition (“IFComp 2021”). Over the next month or so, I’ll play as many of the entries I can manage and post mini-reviews here and at intfiction.org.

If you want to join in, all are welcome to judge! Go to ifcomp.org/ballot to get started.

Scoring rubric

IFComp suggests judges devise a scoring rubric before starting. Here’s mine, which borrows liberally from their example rubric:

  • Rating of 10: Mind-blowing. A game I wish I had written. Something I’ve never seen before, or done extraordinarily well. A professional-grade effort.
  • Rating of 9, 8, 7: A great game, entertaining and nearly flawless, with each increment a gradation of my enthusiasm. Grabbed my attention and sustained my interest.
  • Rating of 6, 5, 4: A promising game that misses its mark, again, graded by my enthusiasm. Piqued my interest but had trouble holding it.
  • Rating of 3: A fatal miss. Flawed in execution. More time spent in revision, or more beta-testing, is needed.
  • Rating of 2: Shot through with bugs. Disappointing beyond being flawed.
  • Rating of 1: Should not have been submitted to the competition. (Honestly, if a game is this bad, I’m inclined not to score it, since I probably didn’t play it for long. It’s unlikely I’ll post a review of it.)

Reviewing rubric

My reviewing rubric borrows from Updike’s rules for reviewing and a few personal guidelines I’ve developed over the years:

  • Try to understand what the author is attempting, and ask myself if he or she succeeded.
  • Quote one or two representative passages to give the reader a chance to sample the prose.
  • Start with positives, list some negatives, and summarize my overall experience. (This comes from a straighforward process I saw used with success in playwriting workshops.)
  • Negatives should come from a place of constructive criticism. Ask if my expectations are in line with the author’s ambitions.
  • Don’t give away the ending or major turning points.
  • Keep the discussion to what’s on the screen. Avoid peripheral issues like ideology or comparisons to other work, unless they illuminate rather than distract.
  • Don’t review something I’m unlikely to enjoy or unqualified to review.
  • Don’t review work I feel compelled to judge positively or negatively no matter the work’s quality.

Obviously there’s some bleed-over between these rubrics: The latter list will inform my scoring, and vice-versa.

I gravitate toward text-only or text-heavy games, meaning my focus will be on games written in TADS, Inform, and the like.

Also, I won’t list my score in the review. I’ll decide the final numbers when I cast my ballot.

With that out of the way, let’s move on to the games I’ve played so far:

“Man in the Middle” reviewed by Salty Air Publishing

Man in the Middle, by Jim Nelson

Over at Salty Air Publishing, Paul Raymer reviews my COVID-19 novel Man in the Middle:

It is interesting that both Nelson and his character are unsure of what to do—how to react to the pandemic. Back in March of 2020 it was all new in terms of how to confront the disease, whether it was going to be short term and over in six months or long term and be with us for a long time. Some of the characters don’t seem to care—and that’s still true. …

The world is portrayed as gray, as a world after the apocalypse—stores closed, streets empty of cars and people. All that adds to the fact that the protagonist works the night shift. …

Read the full review here. Visit Salty Air Publishing’s web site for more books and reviews. And get your copy of Man in the Middle while you’re at it.

As a side note, Raymer adds, “Writing about the pandemic while it is going on was a bold challenge.” For those interested, I described this challenge a while back in “Why I wrote a novel about COVID-19”.

Status

IN MY MEMORY LOCKED selected for the SPSFC

In My Memory Locked by Jim Nelson

This morning I received an email informing me In My Memory Locked was accepted for the Self-Published Science Fiction Competition (SPSFC).

This is the contest organized by Hugh Howey (WOOL) and Duncan Swan (Monstre), well-known authors in the independent publishing arena. They’ve organized ten teams of 59 judges (authors, readers, and podcasters) to narrow the field to a final winner.

Three hundred books were selected for the running, so there’s plenty of competition. The SPSFC generated a ton of buzz via word-of-mouth in the self-publishing community. The number of entrants blew past the 300 mark within hours of accepting applications. I’m plenty proud to have made the first cut.

The first round group my entry is a part of will be judged by File 770.

If you’re curious what the hub-bub is over, check out In My Memory Locked, available now in Kindle and paperback.

Semi-finalists will be announced January of next year. Finalists and winner are announced in June. Fingers crossed!

Video

Forgotten video of Everywhere Man rediscovered

Only by accident did I discover this 2012 video of the first chapter of Everywhere Man, my novella about the ubiquitousness of modern photography, personal disillusionment, and San Francisco’s cable cars. (Trust me—it all hangs together.)

I produced this in 2012 with iMovie. (It shows in the final product.) I intended this to be used for readings to give a flavor of the book’s tone and content. I recall showing it at a reading I gave at the Mechanics Institute, and perhaps elsewhere.

The superb music was scored and produced by Jesse Solomon Clark. The haunting photos, snapped in and around Union Square and Fisherman’s Wharf, were taken by Veronica Weber.

A quasi-relic of a different time.

Everywhere Man by Jim Nelson

Kindle Vella at Always Be Publishing

Kindle Vella sample title page

Over at my Substack newsletter, I’ve posted a broad summary of what we know about Amazon’s newest publishing platform, Kindle Vella. A quick summary:

Kindle Vella is a new pay-as-you-go platform for serialized fiction. …

Vella is structured for publishing stories one “episode” at a time. Amazon doesn’t use the word “chapter”—I’ll discuss this below—but, for now, that’s a handy way to think of Vella’s episodes.

Each episode is 600 to 5,000 words. (Amazon’s numbers are so specific, I assume this range is enforced by their software.) Readers can read the first three episodes of a story for free.

If they want to continue reading, readers purchase Vella tokens to unlock additional episodes.

Will I be writing for Kindle Vella? I’m not certain yet. Serialized fiction is more than releasing a new chapter every week. Writers like Dickens and Armistead Maupin succeeded with serializations because they understood how to feed readers details a drop or two at a time, and keep them wanting for more. It’s an art that seemed lost until recently, when episodic fiction began to make a comeback online.

I’ve written before that I see self-publishing as an experiment, and so this is one more experiment I’m considering. We’ll see.

Read more about what Kindle Vella is and is not over at Always Be Publishing.

Audio

Interview with Reading and Writing Podcast

Posted this week is my interview with Jeff Rutherford at the Reading and Writing Podcast.

During our talk, I discuss my cyber-noir mystery In My Memory Locked, as well as a little on my Bridge Daughter series. It was a great time with Jeff, and I think you’ll enjoy it.

Check out the interview at podpage.com or YouTube.

Three specials for the new year

If you’re looking for new books to read this year, I’ve partnered with over 300 authors to offer specials on new books and boxed sets:

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Too many books! All promotions end February 28. Please give these authors a try, or use this as an opportunity to pick up one of my reads.